8. Our Eight Planets

Mercury spins, swift and small,

closest to the Sun, it races all.

Venus glows with golden light,
shrouded in clouds both thick and bright.

Earth, our home, of blue and green,
where oceans ripple and skies gleam.

Mars, the red, with dust and stone,
a desert world that stands alone.

Jupiter, giant, with swirling bands,
ruler of storms with many moons at hand.

Saturn’s rings in icy flight,
a cosmic jewel, pure delight.

Uranus rolls on tilted way,
a frozen blue in the solar ballet.

Neptune waltzes, deep and cold,
with winds and storms both fierce and bold.

And once there was Pluto, far and small,
a world of ice beyond them all.

In 2006, it lost its place,
now a dwarf planet in the outer space.

Eight planets spin in sunlight’s glow,
each with a story the cosmos bestows.

These are our planets, in orbit they run,
dancing around the ever-shining Sun.

Poet: Vynolyn Naidoo

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